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I might be insane
I feel like I am
Nothing makes sense anymore
Life means nothing
So look out
If you mess with my heart
I'll take you with me
To oblivion
To Hell...
A short one I wrote at college today.
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wususuhou Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
good!
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
Thanks.
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wolfgirl2403 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Very emotional. 
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014
Thank you.
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TahiraKitty Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Student Digital Artist
It's nice but I do not understand why you would take that person to hell cuz hell is a horrible place and if that person messes with your heart that person will go alone, not you so what I wanted to know was why would you take that person?
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014
I meant I'd kill that person for making me feel miserable and I'd kill myself as well. That way we'd both go to Hell. I was thinking about a bully when I wrote this to be honest.
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TahiraKitty Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Student Digital Artist
oh I'm so sorry. I didn't look at it this way. yeah! being bullied sucks!!!
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
Yep, I know that from experience...
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TahiraKitty Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Please don't take it the wrong way.  The poem is really creative and good.
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MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014   Writer
It's almost two contrasting opinions - a) nothing making sense and b) protecting your heart.
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