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Under the clouds
Under the rain
Staring at the coffin
At a stranger's funeral

We're all alone
Feeling the storm
But not the pain
For he's but a stranger

And the graves around us
Are just there
Keeping us company
During this empty moment
I don't know where this came from. But I like how it came out.
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AnikaDStewart Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Student Writer
This is... I'm at at loss for words. So little words that say so much
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014
You don't need to say anything :)
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Good poem ^^ I can relate, I have witnessed a stranger's funeral. And I mean, a proper stranger. We got told the wrong time to arrive at the crematorium. It was awful. Everyone stared. Have you ever been in that scenario? <3
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014
That must have been awkward. No, it never happened to me. <3
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It was VERY awkward. And upsetting. We'd never been to that crematorium before. We didn't know if we were at the wrong bit.
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
Well, live and learn, I guess.
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah :3 silly grandma telling us the wrong times >w<
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014
Hehe, let's assume it was an honest mistake :)
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, let's. My mum was not amused.
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
Hehe. I bet. It's a situation to avoid.
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