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My body is numb
But my mind is in agony

There's light all around
But my soul is a pit of darkness

The world is colorful
But my eyes see everything grey

I'm still alive
But I wish I was dead

Still, I'm here
Still, I struggle
Still, I offer you my hand
So we can escape this nightmare
Nothing special, I think
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JeffCross Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Professional General Artist
I like it again the last two lines really get me...
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Student Artist
nice
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wolfgirl2403 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nice~ Team work to get through. :)
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
Exactly. :)
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:iconwolfgirl2403:
wolfgirl2403 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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SuperGirlSwag Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
pretty good 
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
Thanks.
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Ohreemamma Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you're still alive, we are alive. let's help each other out. beauiful
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
Right! Together we survive!
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WeirdAndLovely Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I think it is.  It's special in that I find the message to be that you've got someone you're trying to help out of what you're in yourself, so you're hoping you can help each other.
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