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Cold and lifeless
Of color devoided
Rotting in the dirt
Parting ways with the living
Soul long gone
Embrace our sad destiny
Just felt like writing an acrostic with the first word that came to mind.
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wolfgirl2403 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Love this type of poetry. :)
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014
So do I  :)
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harii28 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Student General Artist
Its funny, Death is something that none of us wan't to think about. We avoid the thought of death so much, almost living in denial of our looming fates. Of course, when a friend, family member, or loved one dies it sends us crashing down into the cruel and harsh reality of the world. Poetry conveying thoughts about death has a different effect with everyone, though generally may gently touch on strong emotions, making it a very effective as a poem. Still, its a great poem, Heart 

Although for me, I won't "embrace my sad destiny", I'll live in denial of it and enjoy what life I have left :) (Smile) 
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
Poetry regarding the issue of death has a special effect on our minds. It's there, t's real and it will happen to all of us.
And it's a good thing that you want to enjoy life to the fullest :)
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Student Artist
sad thing is.....  that be us some day...... scary huh?
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014
A bit, yeah...
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Student Artist
o.o..
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Monsterintheshadows Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014
This is cool. I wish I was corpse.  Ik that sounds morbid. I'm just depressed 
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014
I understand... :huggle:
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Monsterintheshadows Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014
Thanks and I feel better. I was just having a screwed up awful day Huggle! 
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