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Little girl
Once so inocent
Now broken to the core
Of her very being

Her once free mind
Now trapped in a nightmare

Her once pure heart
Shattered into tiny pieces

Her once hopeful soul
Overwhelmed by darkness and despair

And no one notices
Because she hides her scars
Under long sleeves
Because she hides her pain
Behind a fake smile...
Something simple but dark. Enjoy.
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KingfisherSilentArmy 19 hours ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Your ability that you have shown in this poem to put yourself in another's shoes is a rare gift.
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:iconkillerlord123:
Thanks. I just tried to imagine someone else's problems for a change.
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KingfisherSilentArmy 9 hours ago  Hobbyist General Artist
I've noted you.
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:iconkillerlord123:
I'll take a look.
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ScarsFromMyPastLife Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So beautiful..so relatable...and after reading some of your other poems, I think I have to watch you.
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Tenshi-no-hane-Okami Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is so true.
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Cryptoproctas Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I shed a tear when I read this. So short still awakens so many memories, that fake smile.
it's a beautiful text.
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